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[Just Chat] 日记,争取用英文写个明白

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发表于 2014-12-22 17:00:43 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 nasai419 于 2014-12-24 09:28 编辑

为了写明白写顺畅,开始记日记,词汇有限水平有限,一定错误百出,欢迎指正

Impression of A New Immigrant's Dairy
    Dairy is the trail of heart's growth. By reading Susanna's 10-year-dairy http://www.ourdream.ca/forums/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=5582&extra=&authorid=358&page=12, I witness that her heart grows stronger and broader in Vancouver.
Susanna is the one wandering between staying Canada and going back China. She was thrilled when she got her first in-office job as an interior designer in a Vancouver local design studio. But only 2 months later, she felt depressed about her career future. She worried the unskilled office labor job will make her a frog boil in lukewarm water and in 20 years she will lost all the opportunities to reach her career apex. Vancouver simply equals to better living condition, lower social class, no real career, while return China can open a door for her career pursuit. Her puzzle is career vs. exploring the world, Guangzhou vs. Vancouver. I am several years older than Susanna used to be at that time. I feel she could pursuit her career dream in Canadian way. In another word, well balance work and life and focus on something really interesting.
Susanna somehow found her way. She dealt with hard time by identifying her difficulties and rating her own performance. Her major difficulties are language and space sense (as an interior designer). Once a while, she rated the difficulty of these two. Her funny, methodical and placid way of life made her a purposeful and happy creature in Vancouver. I kind of like her.

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 楼主| 发表于 2014-12-23 09:30:48 | 显示全部楼层
Way of improving English

      Language is just a tool for communication. For new immigrates, strong communication ability is effectively expressing yourself rather than speaking perfect British English. For this reason understanding what Canadians say and responsing properly, is what I need to practice.

      I practice in this way: watching US TV series "the House of Cards" for listening clearly and keep a diary for writing clearly.
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 楼主| 发表于 2014-12-24 09:31:50 | 显示全部楼层
呵呵,有人看啊,很感谢,也很不好意思,词不达意中。。。
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 楼主| 发表于 2014-12-29 11:33:53 | 显示全部楼层

thanks ashima15

本帖最后由 nasai419 于 2014-12-29 11:43 编辑

ashima15 发表于 2014-12-24 12:36

A lot of errors.
Copy news papers first. Understand?


Good idea indeed. Thanks ashima15.Newspapers could give perfect writing samples.

But read which newspaper? For me, it is painful to read national editorials. The long sentences can make me dazzle. Moreover, the national newspapers are shrinking and diminishing. But local newspapers are growing, because every local community has and needs local news.

I am choosing my landing place. Reading different local news which would give me a sense of local life is very meaningful for me.
I googled. Metholand.com covers about 30 high quality local newspapers with stable circulation, but I could not access to any of them. Finally, I get access to Calgary Herald. So far, there isn’t any interesting stories there.
Then, next question is: how to make English newspaper reading not so boring?
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发表于 2014-12-29 13:14:28 | 显示全部楼层
看着两种免费报纸就行了, 街头应该也有免费的。

http://eedition.calgary.24hrs.ca/epaper/viewer.aspx

http://metronews.ca/news/calgary/

你对内容不敢兴趣,说明你还不了解的你的生活环境。
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发表于 2014-12-29 13:49:10 | 显示全部楼层
ashima15 发表于 2014-12-29 13:33
好吧
montrealgazette.com

楼主大概在calgary, 你让人家看蒙城的报纸?
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发表于 2014-12-29 13:51:47 | 显示全部楼层
关注身边的新闻,和周围人有个聊天的共同话题,提高读报的兴趣。
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发表于 2014-12-29 22:04:34 来自手机 | 显示全部楼层
挺好的方法。看别人写的,容易找错处,自己写,难找一些。加油,楼主。
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 楼主| 发表于 2014-12-30 16:00:01 | 显示全部楼层
lamjin 发表于 2014-12-29 13:51
关注身边的新闻,和周围人有个聊天的共同话题,提高读报的兴趣。

哦,这个真是很重要!“共同话题”。看来找到感兴趣的事,提高英语是顺带的事啊,社区报也会看得津津有味。谢谢提醒!
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 楼主| 发表于 2014-12-30 16:07:54 | 显示全部楼层

我昨天好像看到你的回复,不知道为什么,今天都是。。。啦
哈哈哈,你建议看阿甘100遍。。。我想试试,不过不知道老外看100遍“甲方乙方”中文会不会突飞猛进。
你建议,不写日记,提高不了。。。想想还是继续写吧,移民也好日记也好,都是个探索过程,没有过程哪知道结果好不好,而且,过程比结果重要
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