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nasai419 发表于 2014-12-22 16:21:44

提笔忘字的我开始用英语记录每天心得,欢迎拍砖

Empression of Another New Immigrant's Dairy
    Dairy is the trail of heart's growth. By reading Susanna's 10-year-dairy, I witness that her heart grows stronger and broader in Vancouver.
    Susanna is the one wandering between staying Canada and going back China. She was thrilled when she get her first in-offic job as a interier designer in a vancouver local design studio. But only 2 months later, she felt depressed about her career future. She worried the unskilled office labor job will make her a frog boil in lukewarm water and in 20 years she will lost all the oppotunities to reach her career apex. Vancouver simply equals to better living condition, lower social class, no real career, while return China can open a door for her career pursuit.

diane 发表于 2015-1-25 06:22:25

I like it, please continue

diane 发表于 2015-1-25 06:32:04

Can I point out some spelling errors?1. dairy-----diary

diane 发表于 2015-1-25 06:33:01

Can I point out some spelling errors?dairy-----diary

diane 发表于 2015-1-25 07:10:43

interier- interior

diane 发表于 2015-1-25 07:12:15

will lost- will lose

diane 发表于 2015-1-25 07:13:57

go back to somewhere, return to somewhere

diane 发表于 2015-1-25 07:18:39

Please continue.We can learn each other.

life007 发表于 2015-2-4 08:52:21

diane 发表于 2015-1-25 07:18
Please continue.We can learn each other.

It's better use "learn from each other", my very(very ......)beautiful classmate, right?:-D

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